Before and after
I gave Claude a stiff 102-word sales email that an AI had drafted. It had 7 sentences and over a dozen buzzwords. The price hid in sentence 5:
I hope this email finds you well! ... the pricing is $2,400 per month with a 30-day trial.
With the rewrite box from this tool, Claude wrote this:
You can start with a 30-day trial. After that it’s $2,400 per month.
Did you get a chance to read last week’s proposal? I can answer questions by email or on a short call.
Same facts in 59 words, with the price first. It also flagged one promise the email couldn’t prove. Put the rules in the same box as your Claude Memory file, so Claude knows who you are and how to write.
